| I love scenes like that. XD
But, there're parts where your sheep simply looks like a ... guy! @_@ Maybe you could consider shortening the height of the sheep's face? (It's just a little bit long) There are some frames where you got it right (mostly, the chibi parts, where no nose is drawn), but others like that third panel on page 11 is just a little bit guy-ish. ^_^;
EDIT: I've got it. Why don't you try drawing the sheep's nose as a small stroke, rather than a long line? <--just a recommendation.
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