The Dark Chronicles.

[Kadro]

I've been writing a story, it's not a fanfiction but a story that has nothing to do with trickster. Below are some extracts from my story:

The Dark One never sleeps. He never forgets. He is always watching. Waiting....

Deep in the forest of Metex Island, contains a box.
Within this box contains a key.
The key opens a gate.
Within the gate is...
Oblivion.

Leon awoke screaming. The sun was down, but there was still enough light from the pale moon to see that a large figure was leaning over him. He saw a glint of metal plunging down toward his face...

If you would like to read more, or just want to take a visit you can get directly to the page were my story is at this link here:
www.keyminds.net.ms

Currently the story is on stage: 2-0
(#1=chapter, #2= Part)

If you like it, or just wanna give me some CONSTRUCTIVE advice please do so! I'd love to hear what ya think of the story
I'll be updating this thread *almost* every time a new part has been installed, so keep an eye out here for information or sign up to Key Minds and subscribe to the thread if ya really like it ._.
I decided against posting the entire story here 'cause some people may not like it so much.
Well.. have fun reading, I look forward to hearing your opinion enguin:

[Kadro]

Lol ._. I fail at making threads T_T;
If nobodys interested then fine, i'm just going to bump this up anyway T_T; Might aswell :/

[Catharsis]

Most MT readers are interested in gaming or TO-related threads. >_> You'll have better luck at sites like fictionpress.net. My stories there get around 20-30 reviews/critique per chapter.

[Kadro]

fictionpress.net? ok thanks, i shall look into it XD