Trickster Adventure P!

[Pilouette]

@Kaka: Thank you! It's really exaggerated, but it's based on experiance. I once used up one beginner drill and got nothing. D:

@Kotarou: Like I said, it's really exaggerated for comedic effect.^__^v I'm glad you like it!

Also, update with page 11. This page is...eh. I hate that third panel. And I'm not used to drawing at that angle, so the I'm sure about the first panel. .__.

[Rtothef]

lol, i waited awhile to see how this turned out.


I kinda like how the shampoo comes out at the end, but the best part....



PINEAPPLE!!!

[Pilouette]

I took pretty long with this page, didn't I? ^__^v

And thank you! Everyone loves the pineapple! maybe I can use it as the comic mascot. Now I wanna bring it back at come point for comedic effect. XD

I'll try to have the next page up some time soon.

[Kotarou]

I love scenes like that. XD

But, there're parts where your sheep simply looks like a ... guy! @_@ Maybe you could consider shortening the height of the sheep's face? (It's just a little bit long) There are some frames where you got it right (mostly, the chibi parts, where no nose is drawn), but others like that third panel on page 11 is just a little bit guy-ish. ^_^;

EDIT: I've got it. Why don't you try drawing the sheep's nose as a small stroke, rather than a long line? <--just a recommendation.

[Pilouette]

Thanks for pointing that out, Kotarou. I used to draw noses as small strokes, but...It's hard for me to go back to that.
I think I've been drawing her face long because I mostly draw male characters and I've been rushing pages. I'll try to keep it in mind. Again, thanks for pointing that out because I really didn't notice. .__.v

[DukeDevlin]

yesh. one shampoo down... many more to go... *faints*

[Pilouette]

Updated with page 12. I suck at drawing tears. D:
There's not much to page 12, except that it barely sets up a little bit more. ...Um, I think. Also I think this page starts to show how much of a nutjob Comic!Pilouette is. ...I hope I'm not like that. .__.
Geez. Looking at all the pages in order, I can see a HUGE drop in quality. I'll try to take more time on pages, so they'll look better.
Thanks to everyone who's stuck with it this far. It's been a while since I did a comic this long. I'll try to keep it up. ^__^v

[KaKa]

hahah aww, finally 1 shampoo for the poor sheepy xD

is it me...or does sheepy have a ruler figure? *sees how straight her dress goes* makes her look kinda stiff ._."

but great work nevertheless =D *makes some cookies for Pilouette*

[Kotarou]

What a huge U-turn XD

*stares at the air-headed-ness... LOL*

[Freyalise]

The pineapple would be an AWESOME mascot.

:3

Also, I really like the first three frames in 12. Pillouette is so silly xD

[Pilouette]

@Kaka: Yaaay~ cookies! 8D
I'll try to make her less stiff, but...I have a weird habit of making my female main characters look like that. A lot of the female leads I see are super-beautiful and have great figures, so I usually end up making my female leads kind of...plain. Thanks for pointing that out. I didn't notice how stiff she was. .__.

@Kotarou: Indeed! I think this is a defininf moment for Pilouette's personality. ...It's a little scary, really... XD

@Thalestris: Those are my favorite parts of this page. XD I wanna call that Pineapple "Greg." 8D

These next few pages will take a bit longer. They're a little more...action-oriented, I guess? And I'll be the first to say that I'm terrible at action stuff. But ya gotta try to get there, so... I'll try my best to make them look decent. ^__^v

[Skyryder23]

That quest drove me nuts...still doing it... ><

Great comic Pilouette!

[Pilouette]

Thank you!
That quest made me crazy, too! That's what inspired the comic because I got so frustrated with it. XD

[Fuzz]

wow... i never thought this would be good...

i mean i keep browsing through the forums and i would usually skip this thinking
"meh... somoene tried to make a comic and possibly failed"

but when i click on it....

:O about the size of the whole computer screen

VERY NICE JOB!
If you post anymore ill be sure to look at!
i rate it a 99/100^^
page 3 the bottom really didnt fit the story to me...
i like the part "should i hit her?"

keep up the good work


Can i give an idea for the next one?
You walking around trying to do the event quests and drilling in SW.
Then a yamu comes carrying a ribbon and you think its cute.
Then you chase after it and a giant mob of them chase you the other way

[Pilouette]

THank for the kind words and the in-depth opinion! I really appreciate it~!
THat sounds kinda funny! I'll put in my notes!

[Pilouette]

Updated with Page 13~!
Panel 5 is just awful. I like panel 1 though. And that Sand Demon is too cute to look menacing. .__.
The next page will probably have a little more action.

[KaKa]

hahah!! Watch out sheepy Pilouette! Sand demons are out to get you! xD

[Kotarou]

Yes, it's too cute ^_^

GANBAROU!! Page 14 desu~!

[Pilouette]

Page 14~!
There's a little more action but...Ugh. Panel 2 SUCKS. Panel 3 is a little better, but it took FOREVER.
And I know. It makes no sense that the Pineapple knocked her out and the Sand Demon didn't. ...Um...The Pineapple got a critical hit? (AUGH! I've exposed my own failure! DX)